The chart below shows possible causes and results of ‘urban drift’, where large numbers of people move from rural to urban areas.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart below explains information of possible causes and results of urbanization, when numerous numbers of people immigrate to urban areas.
Overall, the immigration to busy main city results many problems for populations.
Based on the flow chart, there are two main problems as a result in moving to urban area. The first one is poor harvest, which happens because use of fossil fuels is increasing more and more. This is a big responsibility as a cause of climate change, which materially affects to harvest. The following problem is lofty expectations from villagers, who think that they could earn more money when living in city. Also, the idea of getting better way of life has influenced these indigenous inhabitants to leave their local community.
Because of native populations’ rapid movement towards rust belt city, many issues raise in urban area, such as idleness, congestion, homelessness, and misspent youth booms. These bring issues: health and social problems, which people find in the city.
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