The charts below show information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These charts give information about the quantity of zebras and buffalos and the amount of rain at the Nboro Nature Reserve from 2005 to 2011.
Overall, the graphs of animals and rainfall have changed between 2005 and 2011. When there are more animals, there was more rain.
In 2005, there were more zebras than buffalos with 50 zebras and 40 buffalos. However, the different view happened in 2007. At that time, zebras were fewer than buffalos with just under 80 and 80 each. This position continued until 2011 when the number of zebras never less than buffalos, but in distinctive level.
During the same period, the rain was in 650 millimeter level in 2005. The amount went up to 1,100 millimeter in 2007, but decreased to 700 millimeter in 2009. On the other hand, in 2011, it rose to 1,200 millimeter.
This can be concluded that the number of animals have correlation with the amount of rain.
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zebras were fewer than buffalos
The number of zebras is less than that of buffalo.
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