HOLIDAYS HONOR PEOPLE OR EVENTS. If you could create a holiday, what person or event, it would it honor and what you want people to celebrate it?
It is undeniable that there are so many things to honor them for every country. Nowadays calendars make it easy to show all events to people. You can see all the historical events there, but I think there are some empty places that we can full them with special events. Depending on the personal experiences, personality type and emotional concerns, people differ greatly on their attitudes towards this issue. We find some people hold the idea that historical events are enough to honor. On the contrary, others believe differently. The second group tries to memorialize other events. From my point of view, the 9 July is appropriate to honor. There are countless reasons supporting my idea. In the following essay I am in explaining some of the important ones.
About 30 years ago, a woman whom named Sara sold all her properties to help orphan children. She gave them to charity and wanted them to buy everything to them. That time the rate of the money which granted was so high. Nearly 3000 children used that money; and the extra money was supposed to spend for other organizations like hospitals or …. So I strongly respect her for her kindness, hence, when I heart this for a first time, I try to get some information about this issue that why she did it. After so much searching, I reached a dramatic point; and it was that Sara has been an orphan, too. She had grown in the orphanage since she was born. She hasn't ever seen her parents and spent all her life with other orphans. While orphanage was all things for her, but she hate there from other side. Indeed, her life style was a big motivation for her to help people like herself.
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...n the orphanage since she was born. She hasnt ever seen her parents and spent all her...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'hates'.
Suggestion: hates
...phanage was all things for her, but she hate there from other side. Indeed, her life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, while, i think, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41163511184 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3436995264 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.85 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110684346915 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033876868862 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478791389971 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107845409254 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909373713472 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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