Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Organizations use advertising to promote their products. Some people say that advertising reinforces viewers to demand the same instead of being different. I believe it to be true because purpose of advertising is to create a demand for product being advertised.
In todays world, there are thousands of identical products and advertisement plays a vital role in creating differentiation of a product. Repitition of advertisement reinforces human mind & creates a very desirous image of a product. Masses watch same advertisement time and again and all want to buy same product. Another group argues against this but in this age, where different mediums and tools designed to maximize reach of advertisement, it focuses on people wanting the same.
Some people say that advertisement increases exposure of masses to new products but research has proved that sales figure of products is directly propotional to views of advertisement. This means that people followed same behavior due to advertisement.
I would conclude this by agreeing that advertisement impact people mind to behave in same manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind behaving'.
Suggestion: mind behaving
...reeing that advertisement impact people mind to behave in same manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48538011696 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22659228639 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7159917414 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213507199272 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955032049479 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526074478059 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139506833285 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315294626 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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