In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing.
Why? Is this a positive or negative development.
In modern society, Western clothes are more preferred than traditional clothes. There are several reasons for this problems and in my opinion, there are both positive and negative effects.
A few reasons can be given to justify the trend of wearing more Western clothing than traditional clothing. First, wearing modern clothes such as suits and jeans is more convenience than wearing some traditional costumes. Almost traditional clothing takes people a lot of time to wear, the option to wear Western clothes can help people save a great deal of time. Furthermore, buying some traditional clothes costs the more great deal of money than buying some kinds of suits and jeans. For instance, in Viet Nam, if you need to buy an "ao dai" which is the particular clothing of Viet Nam, you have to pay at least 3000000 VND to own them while the money you have to pay for a jean is about 500000 VND.
On the one hand, wearing Western clothes instead of traditional clothes can be extremely positive. Wearing modern clothes make people feel easy to integrate into society. On the other hand, the option to wearing suits and jeans instead of wearing traditional clothing lose a good chance to introduce people and cultures in their countries to their friends in the world. For example, when my sister watches some Korean shows in which actors wear Hanbok, she really likes it and then she decides to visit Korean in next month to learn Korea's cultures.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons why people tend to wear Western clothes instead of traditional clothing and this could bring both negative and positive impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, really, so, then, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92086330935 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4430048841 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507194244604 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9449916281 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373896866262 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164579401214 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879334573661 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258475476554 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517939167616 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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