Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Some people think that parents nowadays are more helpful to their children than parent in the past. People think that because the advance in technology, today’s parent become more knowledgeable and helpful for their children. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that parent in the past are more helpful to their children. The basis of my opinion is educational and social.
From the educational perspective, parents consider to be the most important rule to their children. Parents pass on value to their children. Parents were the best model rule to their children. They were the most valued source of education. The education was only enclosed between school and home. Parent in the past were able to help their children in homework and all their school work. On the other hand, nowadays there are many other sources of education in which children can rely on. For instance, with the advancement in technology all students have access to internet. Each student has his own laptop. Students today are in no need to their parent help. All students can surf the internet and get information and help through their computers. That is why I consider parent in the past were more involved in their children’s education.
Socially, the social lives of moms in the past allowed them to be more involved in their children education. In the past moms had more time to spend with their children and involved in their education process. For instance, I can remember when I was child in primary school, after coming back from school my mom was always at home waiting for us. She prepared a healthy meal. She stared to study and helps us to understand the curriculum better. All her attentions and care are managed toward us. However, today’s moms are really busy. They are working or studying for an advanced degree to get a better job. Moms today’s are not involved in their children education as before. The school and the technology are the best sources of information to lead children in their education. In the past the social life style was really accommodated for all parents to help their children educationally.
Personally, for me as I am a mom and I have three children, I am not involved in my kids education as my mom was. I am working full time. I have to take care of my home, such as, shopping, cleaning and every day home task. I do not have time to stay with my kids and help them in their homework. In contrast, my mom was only took care of the home and us. All her responsibilities were to help us to success in our education. That is why I believe that parents today are not involved in their children education.
In conclusion for the reasons I mentioned above, I completely agree that parents in the past were more involved in their children education than parent today’s. Nowadays technology and advancement prohibit many parents from helping their children. Parents today are really busy to consume their time to help children in their education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2530.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 521.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85604606526 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71350786836 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.389635316699 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.0 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6003584229 184% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7452223615 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5789473684 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7105263158 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44736842105 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.582168559684 0.236089414692 247% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183247571457 0.076458572812 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187301222201 0.0737576698707 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.436361448249 0.150856017488 289% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169422890586 0.0645574589148 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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