Writing task 1 (a letter)
You moved to a new place to attend a training course in college.
Dear Priya,
Hope you are doing great. It's been a long time I am writing you and the purpose of my writing is to inform you that I am now living in Mumbai to attend my training course in a college.
As you know since the start of our graduation I was interested further studies but due to the family responsibilities I couldn't complete attend this after my graduation and immediately started a job but now after 4 years of my professional journey I have saved some money and enrolled my self in training course in one of the reputed College in Mumbai and moved here 2 weeks ago. I have taken a admission in 1 year training course in Marketing Management which includes 3 Months of practical training with reputed Marketing agency. I would like to suggest you that you should also do this course to sharpen you skills in Marketing area and grow your career as you are already working as Junior Marketing Executive, and this course will give tremendous boost to your career.
Please think about it and let me know if you are interested so I can give you more information about fees, accomodation and course structure.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ut due to the family responsibilities I couldnt complete attend this after my graduatio...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 394, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nd moved here 2 weeks ago. I have taken a admission in 1 year training course in ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66496544374 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.54844781 44.8134815571 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.5 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293941425698 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11446815012 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802472723703 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169973438044 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884912156513 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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