As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different county to learn language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that students have a tendency to study abroad to gain both foreign language and culture when they were young. In my opinion, I totally agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, there are two prime reasons why students’ language skills could be enhanced through studying overseas. Firstly, the educational environment could improve young children’s language abilities, may be English or others. For instance, many Laos students studied at the Academy of Finance which is a Vietnamese university could have a basic conversation with Vietnamese people, because they speak, write, listen and read the Vietnamese language constantly. Secondly, in terms of social life, they could have countless opportunities to be exposed to native speakers every day to purchase something or to keep in touch with foreign friends. Thus, they would have a happy life in the other country due to a strong relationship with native speakers.
On the other hand, I believe that youngsters would be obtained the cultural values when they have a real experience in the different country. One reason is that each country has a different transmission of knowledge, so international students could broaden their horizons via the particular educational systems. Take Australia, where there are a variety of overseas students as an example, thanks to the advanced and practical education system, it attracts a lot of students coming from other nations each year. In addition, overseas students would acquire the knowledge of the new cultures and traditions. If they study and live in Thailand, they will have the chance to watch the shows of transgender models, and then understanding the difficulties of these people. Hence, they will show much more positive attitudes about transsexual men and women.
In conclusion, I would argue that studying and living in a foreign country brings lots of benefits for young people in both language capacity and cultural values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2875399361 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88463904192 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7485675869 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.214285714 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12294285988 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456158668243 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312762071238 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860428232319 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125103968674 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.