If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details
Throughout the different stages of our life, from childhood through adulthood, we get involved in different activities in different organizations, such as studying in school, researching in university, working in work place, and interacting with different people in various social events. We may learn a great deal of knowledge in many of these activities in different ways. If I had an opportunity to study one subject that I have never had a chance to learn, I would certainly choose to learn PIPING because of two highly important reasons.
The first point which should be taken into consideration is that, by learning Piping, I can get a better understanding of my field of studying. Currently I'm majoring in mechanical engineering at TM University. It's worth mentioning that Piping is not taught in any of the mechanical engineering graduate programs in universities in my country. If It has been taught, students could get better understanding of various fields of mechanical engineering like fluid dynamins. For example, studying at TM University, one of my friends were able to write excellent Computational Fluid Dynamic computer programs. I had always wondered how deeply he understood this field. I finally found out its because he was working in a food industrial company which he could get a good knowledge of piping. Had he not had a wealth of knowledge of piping, he could have never gotten such a thorough knowledge of mechanics. Seldom students of mechanical engineering have such a depth of knowledge of fluid mechanics without having at least a basic understanding of piping.
The second point is that, having the knowledge of Piping, I can prosper in my future career. Piping is an important subject in many working fields like oil and petroleum industries. If I don't have a knowledge of the field, I can't get a favorable job position in oil industry which is the main industry in my hometown Shiraz. There are several oil refinery plans nearby. For example, while I got an internship in one of those multinational corporations, FAN-NIROO Company, I saw how engineers familiar with the field of piping could get excellent job positions and earned a great amount of money. If I had a chance to get knowledge of piping, I can, for sure, get a good job position at such companies and earn a decent salary. Never could any of my friends without this knowledge get a favorable job position.
As it was shown above, with the knowledge of piping a mechanical engineer can succeed. Not only will piping help engineers to expand their knowledge of their major, but also it will help them get decent job positions and earn lots of money. I suggest every mechanical engineer to take this course along with his studies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 496, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to pipe'.
Suggestion: To pipe
...earn, I would certainly choose to learn PIPING because of two highly important reasons...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to pipe'.
Suggestion: To pipe
...into consideration is that, by learning Piping, I can get a better understanding of my...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ding of my field of studying. Currently Im majoring in mechanical engineering at T...
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Line 3, column 903, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Seldom' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...such a thorough knowledge of mechanics. Seldom students of mechanical engineering have...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...like oil and petroleum industries. If I dont have a knowledge of the field, I cant g...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...I dont have a knowledge of the field, I cant get a favorable job position in oil ind...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun oil seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some oil'.
Suggestion: some oil
...dustry in my hometown Shiraz. There are several oil refinery plans nearby. For example, whi...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'pipe'
Suggestion: pipe
...cal engineer can succeed. Not only will piping help engineers to expand their knowledg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, while, at least, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2280.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96732026144 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95469338105 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472766884532 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1985369264 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09142288031 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310995391103 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048246046449 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579108843374 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394080853464 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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