Big companies sponsor sport events to advertise them selves. More organisers believe that it is beneficial to the world of sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable fact that the advertisement of large companies by investing in sport events is more popular in recent years. In my opinion, this could be seen as a positive development for the following reasons.
From an individual perspective, the multinational companies bring a great number of advantages to the sports’s world. First and foremost, they would sponsor games, events, and matches of sports to promote their products. Therefore, offering free costumes, shoes and equipments which are high-qualified and have their brand to athletes is extremely essential. In addition, the expensive prize which is financed by corporation is very interesting. Not only being encouraged players to win in the game, but it is also inspired to youngsters to develop their career in sports. As a matter of fact, there were a lot of talent athletes confessed that they just join in the world of sports after being seen the prize of other champions.
On the other hand, sportsmen and sportswomen are received a wide range of benefits from the investment of big companies. Firstly, companies invest in many sports items to reach more and more customers. In other words, by sponsoring popular sporting events, companies significantly improve their brand’s value. As a result, athletes could be ensured there income while they might not earn enough to cover all cost of living in initial days. Secondly, sports people are practised in a good environment. For example, they will have a perfect condition to train which leads to the promotion of their skills and get opportunities to become champions.
In conclusion, I believe that the investment in sports events of big companies to advertise themselves is obviously contributed on the success of the world of sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24561403509 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00817394702 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.475642613 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9333333333 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216137186592 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747012905448 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875964428006 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167621877184 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881720158503 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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