Television has many useful functions to play in everyone’s life. For some, it's a form of relaxation while for others, it is a companion. Discuss your viewpoint and support your answer with examples.
In this unprecedented time and age, people may find watching television as a part of their lives. One cannot deny the fact that it serves as a daily habit that a person could not live without. In my own perspective, it is definitely a tool for entertainment which is a way to relax one's mind as well as a past time even when an individual is alone in his/her house.
All household nowadays are equipped with television as one of their valued appliances. Owning such a unit can make people's live more interesting as it would offer insurmountable channels to choose from. The availability of up-to-date news information, educational sites, stories that came from life experiences, variety shows represented by popular artists depicts a countless reasons to undeniably label it as a powerful tool of entertainment. It could provide happiness and fulfillment to anybody's watching through the television. To illustrate this, comedy programs continually run because of their consistent patronizers which (is) seemingly are effective in making them laugh.
Furthermore, being solitary does not mean one is not contented at all. This is adds to the function of television which provide him/her a friend in some way. This sounds typical to old-aged people owing to their fate of abandonment. Yet, fortunately, they would still have the means to give joy to themselves by watching their favorite shows and artists. A feeling of incomprehensible satisfaction is flowing before their two eyes even when living alone. For example, an elder could sit all day long in his most-loved couch, spending almost all of his time in front of the television.
In conclusion, the tremendous uses of television could be enumerated like a hundred-fold. Indeed, it has a different significance to each individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...s a way to relax ones mind as well as a past time even when an individual is alone in his...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'reason'?
Suggestion: reason
... by popular artists depicts a countless reasons to undeniably label it as a powerful to...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...nsistent patronizers which is seemingly are effective in making them laugh. Furt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18275862069 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17490344587 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9967594687 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9375 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0739585376994 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224142842336 0.0925447433944 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295787745959 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464566860789 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0088707331122 0.0609392437508 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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