A serious problem affecting countries across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses.
Why do many countries face water shortages, and what could be done to alleviate the problem?
In recent rears, the less of water using for drinking, washing, or domestic activities is more and more popular in all the world. Although there are several reasons for this problem, some obvious solutions could be taken to solve this issue.
To begin with, the phenomenon can be attributable to two principal factors. First and foremost, wasting water is the main reason for facing water shortages of many countries. For example, water is supplied for free in some nations, which can lead to the consumption lifestyle when leaving taps running and washing or brushing teeth. In addition, another worrying trend is the population explosion in globe. To be more specific, water supply systems could not meet the demand of usage water of all people in the world with clean water. Therefore, in developing countries such as Africa, local communities do not have enough water to use, even they have to consume dirty water which have significant effects for their health.
On the other hand, it is not impossible to tackle such problem as there are promising solutions that we can make use of. Firstly, the awareness of individuals must be raised by educating the importance of water in their life. In other words, children should be taught that water plays a key role in their life and they have to protect it to maintain water source in the world. Secondly, a good idea is that government should invest in the water supply systems instead of other activities like entertainment. For example, building a system which supply clean water for inhabitants living in Africa is extremely necessary before their health could be threaten by unsafe water source.
In conclusion, the lack of water in people’s activities nowadays cause a great number of effects to their life because of some reasons, however, some aforesaid measures should be taken to resolve this issue in their modern daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ossible to tackle such problem as there are promising solutions that we can make use of. Firs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0380952381 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58566702676 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4738955218 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308206988948 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106939304349 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488701819045 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175135957855 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757693399701 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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