''Question Authority. Only by questioning accepted wisdom can we advance our understanding of the world.''
Questioning authority has two way consequences according to conditions of society . Though, sometimes, environment so suitable that it brings positive drawbacks, to some extent, it results in chaos and division within society. In my opinion, questioning authority always develops a different point of view and enlightens societies.
Firstly, authority designs an order for society. They do not want people to interrupt the process or do not want to people to be too much knowledgeable about their rights since then, people may rise up their voices against employees or system. For example, in 1991, Turkish small community of workers had decided to unite and required an official union to defend their rights. This suggestion made authority to get angry and took harsh precautions against this small community. At the end, this community became more crowded and after process of discussions, government provided an official unity for workers which represents and delivers their requirements. Hence, authority tries to shape people in a profitable and easy way, the more people deliberate on and fight for their rights, the more authority gets uncomfortable.
Secondly, accepted wisdom here refers to accepted morals, phenomenons. People are taught in some traditions and values, most of them are scared to break or dispute these. However, developed societies has always thinking and questioning minds, this find inefficiency or unfairness in the system. For example, Ataturk made a revolution in favor of women, in order to make them able to vote. Before that, only men can vote and women were not seen as capable of choosing their leader as an individual. If everyone had kept this pattern, maybe we still have same rules. So functioning properly does not mean functioning wisely.
On the other hand, questioning environment can cause chaos, mistrust in society for a while. This can create to polarized group so that it can damage unity. For example, In Egypt, actions against Mubareq has created internal strife within country.
To sum up, questioning authority has two way drawbacks, sometimes benefits of one exceed benefits of other one. Hence, it is worth to take risk after doing some analysis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32571428571 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80636180733 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6031332506 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7619047619 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0592080787035 0.243740707755 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205078708899 0.0831039109588 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028860039578 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387267616639 0.150359130593 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286814146559 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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