The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the diagrams that demonstrate how cement is produced and serves a function in the production of concrete.
To begin with, cement is made through five successive stages which start with crushing that turns limestone and clay into powder. It’s followed by the next phases of mixing the powder and rotating the mixture with heater placed underneath. Then the solution is poured into a grinder so as to be converted into cement. The whole process ends with packing final product into bags in order to be delivered.
When it comes to concrete production, there are four ingredients involve...
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