Do you agree or disagree? It is easier for parents to raise children now than it was 50 years ago.
It is easier for parents to raise their childeren than it was 50 years old.
How to raise children has been one of the most important issues through history in a great many families. Opinions are divided as to whether it is easier for parents to raise children than 50 years old. Personally speaking, I take the view that is is much easier for parents to raise children in this modern era than it was in the past. I will elaborate upon the momentous reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first point worth mentioning would be that there are monumental amount of schools and other institutions from which parents can rely on for raising their helps. An example of my grand mother may shade some light on this point. The mother of my grand mother, who had lived in a small village, had to teach different materials to her children her self such as how to prepare food, how to write, and how to read, to name but a few. Inasmuch as there was not any school in their remote village at that time. Deeming, she had six children; not only did she has to clean house and prepare food for them, but also she had to spend substantial amount of time for teaching them. In contrast now, while taking different classes, children are not totally depended to their parents any longer. Thus, in this modern area parents are able to free up time for themselves since children can learn different materials in both schools and other institutions.
There is a more subtle point we must consider. A great many parents are high-educated which has made raising children much easier. It is crystal-clear that knowledge is the key to success in world today. Parents enjoying have high university degree can treat much better with their children in compared with illiterate parents 50 years ago. To exemplify, my sister who graduate from university recently has a two-year old sun. Never does she punish her child physically whenever his son does some thing in appropriate since she has taken several courses about how to raise an intelligent child as optional courses in her university. The more knowledge parents have, the more successful they would be in raising their children. In contrast, in the past most parents had not have enough information about how to raise a children so that he will be able to prove his abilities in the future.
In the final analysis, I believe monumental amount of schools are helping parents to raise their children much easier. Besides, so knowledgeable parents are in this modern era who can raise high-talented children on account of their knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, thus, while, as to, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78923766816 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55867224863 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484304932735 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8672867063 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349989093075 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11980322449 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125857678953 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270638098853 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124176210942 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.