The college years are the best time in a person's life. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Give specific reasons to support your position.
Each period of life has its own special features and diary, but some of them are more memorable. As far as I am concerned, the college years as a period of life that most of the people experience it, is one of the unforgettable time of life on account of many reasons, three of which are as follows:
The first reason is that, unlike high school, in college, you have more free time, so you can spend more time with your friends. It is obvious that being with friends and having fun with them is one of the best hobbies of people. In addition in college you meet your peers and you can develop friendly relationships with them. Sometimes these relationships can even become romantic and lead to marriage in the future.
The second reason is student associations. In college, you can join various associations you are interested in. In these communities, students share their experience and skills on a particular topic, therefore you can enjoy them and enhance your abilities. While if you want to learn these skills in private institutions, you must pay for a lot of money. Sports team are other communities that students by attending them not only having fun with their teammates but also keep their health.
Furthermore, students in college improve their academic level by enjoying a sophisticated professor as well as college’s equipment. In other words, professors by providing their science and experience, help students to identify their talents and use them to find their future career. In my opinion, this is the most important reason since if you choose a suitable job according to your talents, you will love it and you will enjoy all time of your life.
To sum it up, with all this taken into account, I totally have penchant for the idea that one of the best periods of life is college years because in this time of life you start new relationships and have a lot of funny time with them. Moreover, in college, you know your talents and use them to find an appropriate job in the future. So I suggest everyone to enjoy the best of this period of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...s one of the best hobbies of people. In addition in college you meet your peers and you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, you know, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7095890411 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65653702516 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498630136986 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7349614164 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4375 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270597680558 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921819978161 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699630864256 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160985415611 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468862185226 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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