Today, society provides various ways to lose weight such as special diets and exercise regime. Many people believe though that poor food and lifestyles should be address first. What is your view point of this situation?
It is common today that many people are overweight and they are trying to control their body mass composition by adopting with special diet programmes and exercises. However, in my opinion that this could be controlled by changing their unhealthy lifestyle pattern bad food habits. Below essay illustrates this issue in detail and support my positon.
Firstly it must be recognized that nowadays many people regularly consuming fast food products to save their food preparation time and easy going lifestyle. Most of these fast food products are unhealthy and containing excessive amount of carbohydrates and fat, which causing people overweight and several other health complications. People could easily avoid this health issue by changing their food habits with healthier homemade balanced meal. When looking at this example, it is obvious that people’s lifestyle pattern has direct impact with this overweight issue.
In addition to that it is a generally accepted principle that people should maintain regular physical and sports activities to maintain healthy life. However, with busy work schedule and family commitments, many people avoid or missing these regular physical activities which lead to several medical issues like overweight, cholesterol or blood pressure alike. As a precaution or medical advice, many people tend to follow standardize fitness or dieting programmes to bring their life back to normalcy. As you may aware these programmes could be costly, thus it would be easier and more economical to change their life style of the people to have healthier life and save unnecessary expenses for these fitness and dietary programmes.
In conclusion, people could enjoy healthier life by changing their unhealthy life style pattern. Further, they could save unnecessary expenses they are spending for these special dietary and fitness programmes by maintain healthy food habits and regular sporting activities in their day to day life. I hope this should be addressed correctly by all concern people which will be benefit to the society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 696, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fitness' or 'these fitnesses'?
Suggestion: this fitness; these fitnesses
... life and save unnecessary expenses for these fitness and dietary programmes. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48275862069 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69166755796 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523510971787 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4341865353 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.928571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190221411427 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788522830599 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492977995653 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132125385226 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275633653107 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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