Some people think that Genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There have been many debates about the benefits and consequences of Genetically Modified food in recent years. Some people argue that this development brings humanity many advantages, however, others, including me, believe that it is accompanied with many potential dangers.
The advances in food technology are undeniable. The first point to note is the productivity will definitely increase. With the new technology, farmers can produce crops that grow bigger and faster without having to work too hard, which will also help them make more profit. In addition, foods can be modified to be more resistant to diseases and insects as well as longer expiration and more attractive looks, which will obviously make the products more inviting to customers.
On the other hand, genetically engineering foods also have a lot of negative impacts on our life. Nowadays, many people have distrusted food that have been modified or processed by technology. They tend to prefer organic foods which are grown without using any chemicals because they think that there may be risks involved in the GM food and they can lead to many long-term deleterious health problems for humans. Additionally, interrupting in growing crops by using fertilizers or pesticides is not friendly to the earth and these chemicals can change the whole ecosystem since they are released into the environment and deteriorate our living surroundings. Moreover, engineering foods can cause a fall in nutrition as they are made to look more perfect and attractive.
In conclusion, many people believe that GM foods were created for good purposes, however, I personally think that it also certain potential drawbacks which should not be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37407407407 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88268326838 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0075805396 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.916666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166037902516 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580342310925 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491001525271 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110292092834 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526695772803 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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