The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
It is true that internet has dominated almost all aspects of human lives in recent years. While this technology took its toll in social environment, I believe that it could various benefits for nations and residents of the globe.
There are several reasons why I would argue that positive impacts of Internet far outweigh the negative ones. Firstly, internet revolutionized the industry, education, communication and many other fields in each society. For example, nowadays people can take online courses in prominent universities and access the world class libraries and other online sources easily. Secondly, it provides more job opportunities especially for IT workforce such as web designers, developers and the like. Finally, online services are other advantages which are provided by expansion of internet. Today, we access online shops, bank services and universities. To prove my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that internet accessing could be beneficiary in rural and urban areas and increased the quality of life almost 70% in 2007.
On the other hand, the negative impacts of internet usage should not be neglected. The most important drawback of expansion of internet is the online crimes which have been on the increase in recent years. The statistics reveals that crimes such as embezzlement and fraud boost significantly in metropolitan cities. Besides, this technology could facilitate modern life in different ways, consequently people do less physical activity and this would lead to worse problems such as obesity. Take for example a family who ordering their food via internet instead of going to shop or downloading the educational resources by accessing online libraries instead of walking or driving to university or library.
In conclusion, although internet accessing had detrimental effects in developed countries, it improved the life in different ways and could open doors to new voccations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49019607843 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89766655131 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.022463529 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138329985419 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042778801611 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372642803081 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087588392024 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245204713494 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.