Some people believe that it is good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to share freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are different opinions regarding this issue whether sharing knowledge and information in different areas such as business, science and academic world is good or people should pay to gain them. I believe it is more useful to share information freely for everyone who is interested.
Some argue that enhancing individual information is not easy to share with others freely, as money and time were spent that such information gained. Having worked with many tutors, I understood they do not like to teach their students who are weak in a lesson freely due to time they spend and expenses they have in their personal life. Also, people who work for NASA, Microsoft and Google have salary and none of them work freely.
In spite of the argument mentioned above the opponents argue it depends on people’s personality trait to share their information without any expectation. As they encourage people to increase their knowledge. Also, when one’s knowledge grow society’s culture and discipline will grow. For example, in business world Brian Aspi did a great job and he published all his knowledge freely in Eliots business magazine. In academic world there are many professors who teach English to students and they freely put all they information on the internet. It is believed the major progress in developed countries is that they share their information and experience with everyone. A tangible example are companies who give their employees promotion if they support their new colleague.
In conclusion, I believe that sharing ideas and information with others help us to progress more in our lives.
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- Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras.) In many cases, the people being monitored are unware that this is happening.Do you think the advanta 78
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 78
- car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam.how true do you think this statement is?what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars? 67
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think is it a positive or negative development? 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir information without any expectation. As they encourage people to increase their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20992366412 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77156272388 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8721329032 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253299132518 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100027397851 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787298765866 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179084746395 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454344935777 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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