The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are two maps comparing the situations of an island before and after the construction of some facilities.
As it can be seen from the picture, before the construction was carried out, the island was merely a place of nothing but only with some tropical trees on it. It was surrounded by sea with a beach on its west coast.
After the construction, this island has completely changed to one with great vitality. As shown in the second map, there is a reception in the central place of the island with a restaurant to the north of it. A vehicle track is running from the restaurant , passing t...
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