Traffic Jams are causing problems in Town and Cities. Building bridges can reduce this problem. Do you agree or disagree?
Traffic congestion has become a global dilemma these days. In certain towns and cities these problems are inevitable. I partially agree with the statement. Their are certain steps that should also be taken to avoid the traffic jams such as improving public transport or increasing in fuel price or penalizing people on using more than one vehicle by each family. I will explain these steps in my essay below.
To embark upon, evading the traffic collusion, improvement in public transportation should be the top most priority . For example introducing the underground services or skyscrapers could help the traffic to stay under control. Many countries have already implemented these ideas. Such as Japan has successfully began these services which help them to control the traffic about 20% in last five years. This is the remarkable control I must say. However, it should not be forgotten that government need to invest unusual amount of capital to implement these technologies.
Further, the Government need to take the initiative in sense of increasing in fuel pricing. This step could be basic but very effective in terms of holding people back of using their own vehicles and inclined towards using the public transports. For instance, in the UK, government has imposed many responsibilities to the public for using the vehicles such as CO2 emission charges, mileage expenses, maintenance charges and others.
To elucidate, reduction in traffic pollution not only helps people to move from one place to another more freely but also helps reducing CO2 emission and greenhouse gases which affecting not just one environment but the entire globe very badly.
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27443609023 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7737768041 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.5830648019 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101839680108 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373121863687 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422068240852 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058533663121 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401813458092 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.