The graphs below show the percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
Given are the pie charts that illustrate the distribution energy among various household areas and the contribution of each to the greenhouse effect in Australia.
To begin, in terms of energy usage dominant area- water heating is slightly ahead of its closest follower- heating and cooling (23% vs. 20%). On the contrary, heating and cooling plays much more remarkable role in greenhouse gas emissions generating almost two fifth of those gases, while just over a fifth of them is produced by water heating. Domestic areas such as cooking and standby use the least amount of energy (each 5%), simi...
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