tpo 47
The reading and the lecture both discuss Paleontologists have long wondered whether large pterosaurs were capable of powered flight or whether they were able only to glide. .
While the reading states that there are several arguments have been made against powered flight.
The lecture refutes rhis , by saying that the Pterosaurs were cabable of powred flight .
First of all , the reading claims that since modern reptiles are cold-blooded, ancient reptiles such as pterosaurs were probably cold-blooded as well so pterosaurs would not have been able to generate the energy needed to fly.However , the lecture argues that Pterosaurs have a warm blood because Pterosaurs skin covering by a hiar which makes it is blood has high- tempreture.
In addition , the reading makes the argument is that some Pterosaurs have probably so heavy that they would not have been able to flap their wings fast enough to stay aloft for any length of time.
The lecture argues this point by stating that Pterosaurs have a holo bones which make them weight low nough to stay aloft for any length of time.
Lastly , the reading argues that
The lecture counter this claim by pointing out that Pterosaurs use four legs to jump because they walk on the land by using four legs , not like birds which walk using on the land using tow legs .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r whether they were able only to glide. . While the reading states that there ar...
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...whether they were able only to glide. . While the reading states that there are sever...
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...owered flight. The lecture refutes rhis , by saying that the Pterosaurs were caba...
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...Pterosaurs were cabable of powred flight . First of all , the reading claims t...
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...able of powred flight . First of all , the reading claims that since modern re...
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...rs were probably cold-blooded as well so pterosaurs would not have been able to g...
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...le to generate the energy needed to fly.However , the lecture argues that Pterosaurs ha...
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...enerate the energy needed to fly.However , the lecture argues that Pterosaurs have...
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...od has high- tempreture. In addition , the reading makes the argument is that ...
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... aloft for any length of time. Lastly , the reading argues that The lecture c...
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...ime. Lastly , the reading argues that The lecture counter this claim by pointi...
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...they walk on the land by using four legs , not like birds which walk using on the ...
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...ch walk using on the land using tow legs .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, so, well, while, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 221.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99547511312 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41903291148 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542986425339 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.4703029761 49.2860985944 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.714285714 110.228320801 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 21.698381199 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06452816374 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.09492273731 195% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51810159285 0.272083759551 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252195206657 0.0996497079465 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12185792775 0.0662205650399 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221008007416 0.162205337803 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14090721476 0.0443174109184 318% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.3589403974 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.8541721854 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 63.6247240618 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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