Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions?
In these days, there is no denying the reality that the involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. It is said that the general causes of this phenomenon are the dramatic declining in morality and the pursuit of personal interest in an increasingly complicated world. This essay offers some suggestions which aim at resolving the problem in both short and long term.
The first possible solution that one can consider is schools and parents should cooperate in educating young people on the negative impacts of crimes at an early age so that they are fully aware of the consequences. This is especially true when young people do not have much knowledge and living experience. Without education from parents and schools, it can be argued that adolescents do not have the ability to distinguish right from wrong and can easily commit wrongdoings.
In addition, ample evidence from a number of studies also suggests that it is possible to resolve the problem by reducing young people’s exposure to bad things. This is because absorbing improper materials from the media can make young people develop bad behaviors and rebellious tendency. To give an illustration, if a teenager watches a lot of violent movies, he or she is more likely to hurt other people.
In conclusion, from the analysis above, it is clear that the problem can be solved by educating young people on the consequences of crimes and reducing their exposure to bad things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02448979592 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79046391835 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587755102041 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8518163369 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.1 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216428881249 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877362909589 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122932231869 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124721263148 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127795885984 0.0609392437508 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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