The pictures below show how someone can be tracked using an electronic tracking device. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
Given is the diagram that illustrates how it is possible to define people’s locations properly using special equipments such as satellites, towers, mobile phones and computers. It can clearly be seen that, places of people are detected through simple processes.
To begin with, at the first stage of the tracking process the device must be placed properly into a bag or clothing. After that, device receives data about the searched location from the satellites that are monitoring it. Eventually, transmitting occurs when acquired information is sent to the transmission tower in order to be re-t...
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