tpo 24
The lecture and the reading passage both discuss presence of some living tissues in fossils animals it is called T.rex. and it contain actual tissues, and the researcher found it in broken bone One one hand, the reading clearly claims that the researcher discovered in the T.rex bones soft tissues like blood vessels and red blood cells. On the other hand, the lecture refutes this, by saying that the arguments were questionable and implausible.
To begin with, the reading stats that there are small branching channels. Moreover, there are blood vessels with presence of soft, flexible organic materials inside the hollows in the bone. However, the lecture refutes that presence of some soft tissues come from some kind of bacteria which responsible about this materials.
Secondly, the reading makes argument is that presence of spheres indicate presence of red blood cells, that is responsible to carry oxygen and nutrient to other cells. Conversely, the lecture counters this point by saying the presence of spheres come from different origin.
Lastly, the reading stats that the scientists found collagen on the bones. The lecture counter this claims by pointing out it is impossible to find the collagen over 70 million years. And the collagen source from the researcher hands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... in fossils animals it is called T.rex. and it contain actual tissues, and the rese...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contains'?
Suggestion: contains
...sils animals it is called T.rex. and it contain actual tissues, and the researcher foun...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: One
... the researcher found it in broken bone One one hand, the reading clearly claims that t...
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Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ind of bacteria which responsible about this materials. Secondly, the reading mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 207.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28019323671 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43392938044 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51690821256 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0956885882 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06452816374 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333102223545 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121993198602 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100602069324 0.0662205650399 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195201958408 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749547407088 0.0443174109184 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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