Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become move useful adults.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, modern areas force some parents to give the best standard of education for their children. Also, parents think that if children get education early, children will get more knowledges. Some inhabitants think early education is not good for children, because children will learn about encouranged children to have sense of competition. But, a few inhabitants believe that children who are taught to co-operate first rather than compete, so they become more useful adult. There are two arguments about this topic. This essay will discuss about these view.
Some citizens believe, if children get education too early, it will be useful. Firstly, children will know about how to compete with the other, so they will have a sense of competition. Also, children will have good of mentality, if they are become adults, they will be strong to face competition. It is good points to their future. Secondly, looking for a job and competition in the work life is not easy. But, children learn to early about competition, it makes they will survive they are enter to work life.
Children know about a sense of competition to early. I think, children cannot get enjoyful moment in their chilhood. They are less playing their stuff and have hard think to get more achievement. Children are usually playing, running around, watching movie, and joking. But, they know about competition, so they did not satisfied about their achievement.
To sum up, children are enter early education will get new positive point, and also have sense of competition become useful adults. However, children less enjoyfull moment in their chilhood.
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