People Believe That A Crime Is A Result Of Social Problems And Poverty, Others Think That Crime Is A Result Of Bad Person's Nature. Discuss And Give Your Opinion?
People have distinct perspectives about the principal cause of crime. While some people argue that innate characteristics bring about crime, I believe that crime arises as a consequence of social issue and poverty.
There is a belief that human nature determines whether a person become a criminal. Firstly, people who are cruel seem more easily to commit offenses than those who are equable. Actually, many crime cases, perhaps even felony cases, have taken place unfortunately since criminals who face up with the act of provocation are unable to curb their aggressive behaviors. Secondly, bad characteristics, including laziness and selfness, also breed future offenders, who seek to acquire a huge amount of money without working legally for it. There are, hence, strong reasons supporting the view that bad inborn nature results in crime.
In spite of the above arguments, I am more inclined to the option that external problems other than human internal nature pave the way for an increase in crime. It is hardly surprising that people perception of law obedience is driven by external problems. For instance, serious social issues namely alcohol and drug addiction could undermine citizens’ law compliance, changing law-abiding citizens to become offenders. Another reason is that, more broadly, poverty leads to a rise in crime. Should individuals do not have enough money to make ends meet, they will be tempered to perform illegal actions so as to sustain their lives and support their families.
In conclusion, although both of the views certainty have its own validity, I believe that the problems in society and living in penury mainly responsible for offense activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34831460674 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78972168809 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681647940075 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2348752498 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239004536039 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777159154436 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692831037249 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133579907897 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725369837387 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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