Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Nowadys, there are many news sources to get access to the information. Some people prefer just a news sourse, other think different news sourses must be considered to be well-informed. In my opinion, people need many resources for these following reasons.
Firstly, there is not confident resource for news and there is a vital need to variety of resources to be persuaded. For example, about the recent government policy to increase the benzine price, a considerable range of the prices were presented by the news supplies. However, the real range of the price can be only predicyed by evaluating the most of the resourses. Therefore, one news resoures is not addequate to be well-informed.
Secondly, if people need the updated news, they would use the variety source of news. It is clear that the news resourses does not simultaneously get acess to the current affairs. Therefore, we need to consider many different news respurses to be confident about the recent news. For instance, I was responsible for emergency department in Kermanshah, a western city in Iran, and after the recent earthquake in the Kermanshah, the number of deaths increased every time and it was greatly necessery for me to be updated using the many news resources. Therefore, I think this policy is great idea in order to be well-awared for news.
To conclude, to wrap it up, in addition to aforementioned reasons, there are also many other reasons and examples that can be persuasive enough and lead us to the conclusion why I agree with the statement. To recapitulate the reasons, I agree not only because they to be prsuaded, but also because they to be updated using the different sourse of news. These led to they will be well-informed about the news
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different news', 'a good deal of different news'.
Suggestion: much different news; a good deal of different news
...affairs. Therefore, we need to consider many different news respurses to be confident about the rec...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...affairs. Therefore, we need to consider many different news respurses to be confident about th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92832764505 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.920161729 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498293515358 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1103674318 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2666666667 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322298256696 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120633625281 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624322666585 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207898321138 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582061915284 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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