The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In order to meet the increasingly drastic competition among nations, for each nation, the major concerning is prepare its young people turn to be powerful leaders in government, industry or other fields. Then there comes an issue that is it the most essential sense of leaders as cooperation, or competition. Opinions vary from individual to individual, and for my part, the ability of working well with others----in short, cooperation is tremendously important for leaders.
Admittedly, competition near occur every area of human society, and becomes increasingly fierce as the rapid development o...
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Sentence: In order to meet the increasingly drastic competition among nations, for each nation, the major concerning is prepare its young people turn to be powerful leaders in government, industry or other fields.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and prepare
Sentence: Then there comes an issue that is it the most essential sense of leaders as cooperation, or competition.
Description: The tag a pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by the
Suggestion: Refer to it and the
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No. of Words: 518 350
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No. of Different Words: 266 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.771 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.234 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.021 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 158 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 117 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 87 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 8.113 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.285 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.52 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
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