Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while other disagree.
Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give the reason and relevant examples.
In recent years, it has been observed that majority of the people take participate in dangerous activities like scuba diving, bungee jumping and so on. Some people assert that these sports should be banned whereas others disagree with this statement. I believe that these sports should never be banned.
To being with, it is possible to claim that these sports give name and fame to the sports person. This further gives them recognition in this competitive world. Divers, for example, are highly valued because they dive in an ocean in order to find precious stones and also provide knowledge about marine life.
Moreover, these sports are being played by the sports person, so that they could earn financial rewards in order to fulfil their basic needs. Some of the competitions, for example, are organized by the government and organizations. The hefty sum of money is paid to the winner. Hence, it is essential for them to take participate in such dangerous sports. Furthermore, these sports also build confidence in the sports person. They feel more energetic and comfortable. This is a positive phenomenon for a country if its denizens are satisfied and self-motivated.
At the end, I would like to say that although a group of people believe that dangerous sports should be banned; however, I assert these should be promoted on a large scale.
- Who is responsible for Climate change, whether Government or industries? 72
- What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved? 77
- Some people believe that TV is a useful invention. To what extent you agree with the statement. Give your opinion and explain with the observations and examples from your personal experience. 61
- Who is responsible for Climate change, whether Government or industries? 55
- Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool level. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
...se sports should never be banned. To being with, it is possible to claim that thes...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... these sports give name and fame to the sports person. This further gives them recogni...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...r, these sports are being played by the sports person, so that they could earn financi...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...s in order to fulfil their basic needs. Some of the competitions, for example, are organize...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ese sports also build confidence in the sports person. They feel more energetic and co...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05777777778 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66413212886 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582222222222 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8641976926 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2857142857 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200795721087 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710685703597 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897722204929 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135857116172 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717997286582 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.