As a result of advances in medical care average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development what are the disadvantages of an aging population for individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
We live in a modern world where people gets myriad of benefits. With an advancement in medical care, we are now witnessing an increase in the average life expectancy for men and women. This phenomenon has both the pros and cons which will be highlighted below followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, longer life gives us a better opportunity to perform our duty efficiently. Take the example of my grandfather who lived for 100 years which helped him to nurture his children in a better way helping them in attaining a better education to serve the humanity the better. Therefore, living for a longer period definitely assists us to shape our society.
On the other hand, increase in average life expectancy also leaves some demerits to our society. I know a family, talking about my experience, where there are four elderly people who regularly need special support and treatment to move around. Such a situation sometimes made their family members cry as of they are considered as a burden to them, occasionally.
To conclude, it is quite clear that increase in life expectancy due to a robust medical care is a blessing to a certain extent, but not all the time. If the aged persons are sound in health only then they might contribute our community positively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a certain extent, but not all the time. If the aged persons are sound in health on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, talking about, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87214611872 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74979883488 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675799086758 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2169192997 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234199615089 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815429042276 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103369602569 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13431042843 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875383095444 0.0609392437508 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 73.5 Out of 90
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