You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to the supervisior of department , describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about my kitchen robot that I purchased in your center store last Saturday and with your poor customer service I received when I called your company to discuss the problem.
The main problem with the robot is that its knives do not spin and work properly, when I turn the device on the blades start to turning itself round and then they suddenly stop spinning..
Luckily, I noticed that fault after short time, I called the your shop requesting fast action to be taken, however, the person who answered the phone replied that there was nothing he could do to resolve this problem.
I would appreciate it if you could replace my robot for a new one of the same brand and features. I will kept the receipt my purchase for your replacement.
Please contact me and inforn me know how you insist to resolve this problem.
Your Faithfully.
Steven
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| 2018-01-16 | Gokhan_Kurt | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...und and then they suddenly stop spinning.. Luckily, I noticed that fault after ...
^^
Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
...d that fault after short time, I called the your shop requesting fast action to be taken...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'keep'
Suggestion: keep
... of the same brand and features. I will kept the receipt my purchase for your replac...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75155279503 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45870175194 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7508876542 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137372955341 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721519996073 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046526608529 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688477880856 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611276904961 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.