The picture below shows Bell Hill farm in 1976 and the changes that took place in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
Given is the map that illustrates Bell Hill Farm and changes that occurred there from 1976 to 2006. It can be clearly seen that, due to significant alternations this place turned into the Environmental centre by the end of the shown time period.
To begin with, the storage in the north-west, which was being used for farm machinery, was replaced with a parking lot. The barn to store corn, etc. just by that storage was converted into a multimedia room. Another remarkable change occurred in the eastern side, since a student housing was built on the fields that once were used to care for cows an...
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