Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs within the society in which they are sold. To what extend to do you agree or disagree?
In recent age with developing of technology and enhancing the number of producers to make a different kind of products, advertisement has stood out of all priorities. This argument will be proven by looking at how with a significant increase over the number of producers for various good, not only do buyers have difficulty choosing a favorable product but also competition between producers to persuade consumers has become hard and serious. There fore, advertisement plays a key role in marketing to persuade people to buy some remarkable product that highlighted sometimes by on customer's mind. I agree with this opinion, to some extent, but before drawing a quick conclusion it needs to be discussed.
For one, most of the time, companies use prominent people in their advertisement to persuade the fact that their products consumed by famous people. For instance, a few years ago a well-known singer, Jennifer Lopez was participating in the advertisement of Pepsi, the favoured soft drink. It is an undeniable fact that this advertisement becomes very popular in short time and earned a great income for the company.
On the other hand, as a result of advertising on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality. It is clearly seen that people buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not need it, but they buy them impulsively soon after watching interesting advertising. Further more, some consumers invoked by advertising campaign, the other people may be effected by the trend. As this show, they may buy a product that is not the real needs of society.
In conclusion, all the mentioned facts into account that we cannot completely accuse the advertisements on cheating, because watching them helps us to compare the items or introduce new one, which has not seen yet. So, we can watch advertisement but decide to base on our budget and needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 444, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Therefore
... consumers has become hard and serious. There fore, advertisement plays a key role in mark...
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Line 1, column 555, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'highlighted'.
Suggestion: sometimes highlighted
...ple to buy some remarkable product that highlighted sometimes by on customers mind. I agree with this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in short, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08681672026 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98419308012 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7750967547 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159369509748 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560698644726 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026431987002 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872784074083 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341377447685 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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