Some people believe that it's wrong to make school student make home work every day others think Children of all age need the extra study to help sauced at school. Discuss both this views both ur opinion.
Home work is considered as prominent tool for study at school.A group of people has the view that extra work given to do at home is burden on students while others have opinion that work given to assist studies at own level boosts the overall performance of child.This essay willdiscuss the both view and will suggest the later view as more important.
In the rational world of today, schools these days are changing in various aspects.Now are the days of day- boarding schools in which teaching methods has been changed drasitically.Students do their class work and other activities in school itself.Work given other than classes makes the student less interested and bored .To illustrate, schools in Developed countries like USA, Japan,Canada and England never burdened their students with loads of work,hence the best calibre florishes in such schools.Indirectly, to make students love their teaching it is always advisable to give them reasonable amount of studies to which they enjoy fully.
On the contary to earlier view,exponents of conventional teaching system,work given for home is a pulse to the life of syllabus.It is the best tool which always keeps the student on track and oriented towards the main stream of study.Alongwith this, a child do not break the continuity of his lessons if given revisions and drill lessons for home.For instance, it has been mentioned in revised policy of education of India ,in the year 1992,that home work not only build up the memory of pupil for a specific topic, but also self -study saves time and energy of the pupil.Work given by teacher to do at home is a easy going idea to boost learning at self phase.
This essay discussed both the ideas that how work given other than class study is a extra burden on students today.This essay also discussed that home assignments are good enough to make students more interested in studies.In my opinion, later view is more resourcefull as work given for self-study helps the child to learn independently and more conveniently which gives positive results in long run during study years in school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04022988506 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89073032971 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 87.0 20.2975951904 429% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.216941926 49.4020404114 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 438.5 106.682146367 411% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 87.0 20.7667163134 419% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331645985471 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220832981747 0.084324248473 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073286477605 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220832981747 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073286477605 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.8 13.0946893788 350% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.37 50.2224549098 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.0 11.3001002004 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.8 10.1190380762 364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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