Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing, skydiving, bungee jumping or not. What are the reasons for that?
Nowadays, playing exciting and dangerous sports has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether the hazardous activities must be supported or not?”. It is a widely held view that doing regular activities is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that adventurer sports play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that it increases our self-confidence to overcome the challenges as well as contribute to release adrenalin. Secondly, it can be argued that the industries of sports equipment will be able to grow their productions and income. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that such sports are so exciting and the young people will be able to try new occasion.
However, there is no doubt that dangerous sports provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that permanent and serious damages are happened as a result of adventurous activities. Moreover, it is quite clear that the expenditure of training and purchasing equipment is high in price. A very tangible example to illustrate would be the disability of youth that has been occurred by skiing or skydiving.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that playing dangerous sports under professional trainers must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
- Some effective people like repetitive routine such as eating the same food, do you like this way? Discuss your views. 80
- Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not? 85
- Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion? 80
- The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree? 77
- Do you think English will remain a global language despite globalization? Discuss you views with examples. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...xciting and dangerous sports has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23722627737 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04438414377 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7757318547 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806743691694 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268229915129 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323100243994 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483725599688 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307852491128 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.