Are school uniform benificial?
These days, many schools in the world require students wear uniform when being in school. I completely agree that students should wear uniform for its some undeniable advantages. There are 3 benefits of school uniform.
First of all, wearing school uniform helps ensure equality between each student. In school, there are students from different backgrounds, some of them are rich, some belong to the upper middle class and some lower than that but with the school uniform everyone becomes similar. Students who do not have conditions to buy expensive and fashionable clothes will avoid feeling of inferiority and reduce the comparison between the students and increase sense of equality. In addition, the difference between male and female students in all levels of education will be narrow, everyone also has opportunity and condition to develop talent. In fact, there are many schoolgirls who have won high prizes in the nation and international competition. Also, in every school especially in university students from various different religions, so a school uniform minimizes the religion difference among students and contributes to reducing violence in school.
Besides, every school has their own uniform, so wearing uniform make student more proud of their school traditional education so students will get the motivation to learn harder. For instance, if students wear school uniform for attending to competition, they will perhaps think they are members of the collective and this help raise self-confident and sense of collective honor. Moreover, wearing the same uniform definitely brings a sense of solidarity among students.
School uniform is also important for students to save time changing clothes or outfits. Especially male students often waste many of time to fashionably combination of shirt, dress or skirt so wearing school uniform make easy for them to save time. Furthermore, parents do not need to waste much more money to buy lots of clothes for their children.
In conclusion, for the benefits mentioned above, I personally think that students should wear school uniform.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45426829268 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75009970886 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530487804878 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7122069124 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338281663892 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169188901051 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13402883892 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250279523586 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672535209743 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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