You should spend 20 minutes on this task.
You are unable to complete your course – you have discontinued it. Write a letter to your teacher to thank him and explain –
▪ why have you discontinued it?
▪ what are your reasons for thanking him/her?
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Raoufi.
I am writing to inform you, to my sadness, I am not able to continue IELTS classes, and I must quell coming classes due to several matters.
First, as you might know I took an IELTS exam last week which I did not get the scores needed although I had been studying english hard for the past 6 months. I simply need some rest so that after a while I try again to achieve my goal. Second, my economic situation is a little poor since not only did I work less in the clinic but I had to pay for the course and exams.
But still despite my failure in the IELTS, I am grateful about the service you provided. I believe my knowledge has become well enough during the course and I just need some practice to master the skills to success, which would be impossible if I had not a marvelous teacher like you. Moreover, getting to know a perfect person like you and become friend with is an honor for me. I sincerely hope that we keep in touch outside the institute .
Thanks for being the best teacher I have ever had.
Yours Truly.
A.Farughi
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| 2018-01-28 | Aidin_1805 | 91 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 441, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t we keep in touch outside the institute . Thanks for being the best teacher I ...
^^
Line 11, column 2, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Farughi
...her I have ever had. Yours Truly. A.Farughi
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29850746269 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22673245315 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6021879586 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192113431259 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711292935895 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557763315101 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111931558331 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373537523577 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.