Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used
drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day.
The long term health costs are high-for smokers themselves, and for the
wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizens from
the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions
up to the individual?
cigarettes are widely used among people around the world while they are harmful for health and society. In my view the governments should take some measures to harness the usage of this substance in the society so that the issues related to the individual and society health could be rectified.
Tobacco which is the main part of the cigarrete, has addictive effect on human body. After smoking a cigarrette an amount of nicotin enters the blood system and then the brain and affects it permanently; as the result after smoking for a short period the person will be addicted that could come with a huge cost for him in long term. Furthermore based on solid studies in univeridy of Tehran the cigarette is one of the main reasons of lung cancer among smokers.
Not only will the person who smokes be affected by tobacco, but also the people around him exposed to the cigarette and side products like smoke or smell will be adversely influenced. Therefore I agree as the token of care and responsibility toward the populations governments can set some rules to urge the smokers to quit smoking or reduce their impact on others.
To sum up, cigarettes are bad for health of the person who smokes as there are addictive and also the people who are next to smoker, therefore should be controlled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cigarettes
cigarettes are widely used among people around the...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... with a huge cost for him in long term. Furthermore based on solid studies in univeridy of ...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...smokes be affected by tobacco, but also the people around him exposed to the cigarette and side produ...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... or smell will be adversely influenced. Therefore I agree as the token of care and respon...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...smoker, therefore should be controlled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, while, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76548672566 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51819675627 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5969694135 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.625 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.9669160288 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210375591562 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864308085008 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462154039467 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121467564664 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381543232346 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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