Medical science and effect on life expectancy
Medical science has big growth in in recent century and effect on life expectancy in many countries, but in other hand limitation has new action on organisms, clearly, and there are both merits and demerits to this, which I intend to discuss.
There is certain advantages to medical science. Firstly, the advantage of medical science is environmental life cycle. One obvious that more human would benefit life expectancy in that people could to save their lives. There is a further advantage to life expectancy and it is related to increase Population, owing to the fact that human could be protected their ambitions about long life. It is clear that medical science has opened up novel convenient avenues to help human to protect their family and their friends.
There might be possible disadvantages to medical science. Considering the increase Population needs more food, some human would suffer organisms on the earth. It is largely attributed to harm alive creatures in the world. There is also a limitation disadvantage to medical science, as human destroyed all environment in the planet. For example, when Population increase on earth, human want more food and place it seems people must eat some of animals such as cows and pigs for food and destroy more environments for more houses. Arguably, limitation cycle of world came back to humans and might to change our future like Dinosaurs.
On balance, having discussed the positive and negative aspects of life expectancy, I think that the merits easily outweigh the demerits. I strongly believe that people should conservatively step on growth Population in the earth. We should not lose sight of the fact that our resources are limited. As a result, humans should kept their live but in depends on planet cycle resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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Medical science has big growth in in recent century and effect on life expec...
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Message: Did you mean 'There are certain advantages'?
Suggestion: There are certain advantages
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the animals') or simply say ''some animals''.
Suggestion: some of the animals; some animals
...food and place it seems people must eat some of animals such as cows and pigs for food and dest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11262798635 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67939609144 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0363079373 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297106799163 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941763569013 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110766307756 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187015766399 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148678286972 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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