You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at a hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Manager,
I am writing to you regarding my personal belonging which I forgot at your hotel's "The Hyatt Regency" meeting hall number 2. I am Pallavi, and today I visited your hotel for my official meeting with clients. We had met at meeting hall number 2, and I left my important paper bag on the table of the room.
This bag is important to me as it contains the client-related information, which is essential for the completion of my task. I am not staying in the same city where your hotel is situated, so it is not feasible to me to come to collect my paper bag.
I will appreciate your help if you could send the scan copy of my documents to my email id "abc@gmail.com". Thre are only three pages you need to scan from page 3 to 5.
Looking forward to hearing back from you and thanks in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Pallavi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15249084909 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2170809053 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272571215121 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107587744602 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055135864484 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154763459501 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614121782653 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.