More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative?
Some individuals argue that being more fashionable is important, particularly in choosing clothes. This is because they put the appearance as a paramount value in their life. I personally believe that fashion leads people to positive way.
In today societies, many people are undoubtedly spending their money for fashionable clothes. A host of dress styles created by designers and their works invite people to become trendy, stylish and good looking. People even pay high cost a designer for a splendid dress which suit to their body for certain events such as wedding party and ceremony. Thus, it is unquestionably true that choosing the best clothe is important for people's appearance.
There are some positive effects of being fashionable in a daily life. Firstly, people will be more confidence by wearing their best dress in any occasion, for instance meeting up with a prominent person, attending birthday party and so forth. This is because they evidently comfort with their dress. Moreover, people will gain more confidence to appear in public, especially for those who work as a motivator or public figure. As a result, people will experience their daily pursuit optimistically.
Fashion or just clothing in general could display creativity. A girl, just by looking at another girl's shirt can be inspired and receive new ideas. The creativity in trends help people become more creative and open up new ideas to people. Also, "trends" in fashion can allow people to understand society. A antisocial person, could open up a social media network and could become sociable. The same concept applies in fashion trends, people can be up to date with what is happening the world and therefore lessen the chances of being left out or behind in the real world.
Personally, I'm really into fashion and I think dressing fashionable is a great opportunity in obtaining ideas and just for the sake of dressing to your preferences. But, I am aware that fashion trends can allow people to judge more if one is not "in trend" and people can get cliquish if you're no up to date with everyone else.
In conclusion, fashion becomes more important in this world today. Wearing the best clothes in any occasion gaining possibility to improve the confidence level. Therefore, fashion becomes a positive development to foster people's personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19060052219 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8312914311 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548302872063 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1362595323 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4347826087 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.652173913 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65217391304 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281741082216 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891064760377 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603757991526 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170653426377 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566354173501 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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