In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modernisation era, Technology revolutionised the human existence. Indeed technology is prevailing all over the world and use it every sphere of life such as in education, business etcetera. With the advent of it, there are various sources are available from where this to students acquire the information. Some people asserts that with the arrival of various sources of information, there is no need of a teacher in the modern education, while others are condemn about the statement. I agree with the latter statement which I will portray in the following segments.
There are umpteen reasons which are propitious to my viewpoint. The pre-dominant reason is, teachers are the indispensable part of the education. Indeed, teachers are the torchbearers and role model for their pupils. perhaps, with the advent of Internet, students get acquire the knowledge from it but somethings are still there that are not contained by Internet, which are only given by teachers. Further more, teachers has experience in teaching, they taugh children with their profound knowledge which they get from their experience. There any courage and motivate them about their goals and there is a big hand of children in cultivating the child.
Leaping further, Aldo students can get information from Internet but still there is the need of instructor who can examine them every time and secure them from astray. Because there are many prone sites are prevailing on the Internet, which can affect the pupils mind and hinder them from peruseing their study with concentration. Do you do these pronological sites,The aftermath will detrimental, which will perhaps ruined the carrier of the learner.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I deem that mentor are the imperative part of education, without them student can not able to show their superiority in the word. I cogitate that, teachers give learners knowledge as well as moral and ethical values that can help them in acquiring success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1737804878 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81157571236 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9261265868 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18917384322 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064439782717 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667169422843 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111451396153 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691640431845 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.