You have recently moved into a new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the invoice which may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter.
-Introduce yourself
-invite your neighbour
-describe the planning of the party and express your concern
Dear Phutela
I am neighbour of your home. I am writing this letter to invite you to party for shifting into a new home.
I recently moved from my old house to new home in aurora society it is situated in Chandigarh it is very big society basically I am working in HDFC bank in last five years. While t you happiness of new house. I will arrange party for my relative and my friends and his party will celebrating on answer Cytie and 18 feb at night. And I would be grateful if you come to this party.
As a neighbour, invited you, because because neighbour is much important, they stand with person in any joy and sorrows. This party is huge party, there are lots of cuisines for eating, specially, I arrange the big music system for dancing. I told you, if you have any problem from music, please tell to me as soon as possible. So I could solve this problem.
Your sincerely
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to invite you to party for shifting into a new home. I recently moved from my ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...party for shifting into a new home. I recently moved from my old house to new...
^
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...orking in HDFC bank in last five years. While t you happiness of new house. I will ar...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'celebrate'
Suggestion: celebrate
...ative and my friends and his party will celebrating on answer Cytie and 18 feb at night. An...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: because
... party. As a neighbour, invited you, because because neighbour is much important, they stand...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37125748503 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37048617468 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0678622674 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3636363636 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320459009349 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122909767316 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841628489855 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226236742297 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113026967917 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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