some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Other think that the money should be spent on improving shools and hospitals. Discuss both
In recent years, spending too much money on constructing buildings rather than investing in education and healthcare has become a broad issue to the general public. In my opinion, I agree with the latter idea. Discussed below are several reasons supporting my perspective.
On the one hand, there are some arguments in favor of the statement that improving schools is more significant than large, impressive buildings. To begin with, children make a major contribution to our country and schools where can help them make the technology develop when they grow up. This means that schools where they acquire knowledge have to safety. What is more, there are one million people who do not know alphabet. So that government should spent money on solving this problem, such as hire teaching people.
Moreover, we should spend money on improving healthy facilities, too. The hospital is also needed to provide the population with complete healthcare. The state ought to expand areas for the hospital to avoid bad cases.
On the other hand, however, huge, impressive buildings are improving for a city when we have good education and healthcare. The purpose actually is to make the city that looks great in tourist or urban opinions.
In conclusion, we should spend money on improving schools and hospitals to satisfy human needs such as expanding areas than use for buildings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...lthcare has become a broad issue to the general public. In my opinion, I agree with the latter...
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Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat schools where they acquire knowledge have to safety. What is more, there are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, as for, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13839285714 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6563925532 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0779652921 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2142857143 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1896210178 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572991610486 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555229495372 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974872055496 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213427071556 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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