In some areas people dont use internet so some think that it is responsiblity of government to ensure them to use it
To what extent do you agree or disagree
there is no doubt that today internet spread its tentacles all around the world but in some areas people dont use internet due to poor economical situation. presently,In my point of view,government should take resbonsbilities to aware people about the benifit of accessing internet
first and formost,with the use of internet,people can connect with digital world due to its conveniences.For examples,one can use it for different purpose such as buisness and education and so fourth so they can be faciliated with internet.Secondly,it is better way to make country cashless because they can transfer huge amount online.as an example,in many countries,citizen give importance to modern method of transaction they pay in cash.
Next,it is also fruitfull for citizen because they can get huge profit by involving in internet so they can boost their buisness in other countries and can earn huge wages.consequently,it is lucrative for growth of economy.Last but not least,In some countries,a massive proporation of people follow ordinary culture so they can know about modern lifestyle and can adopt it
By contrastIn this modern era people have to pay extra taxes on transaction.it is not affordable for the poors to fullfil.moreover they have to pay spend enormous amount to suscribe it.in many countries,a significant number of people cannot afford because the are in poor condition so some people believe that government shouldnt force them to use it
To conclude,government is middle path to ensure individuality about the benifit of using internet as i have discussed above
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-02-14 | Arun monga | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there is no doubt that today internet spread ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ound the world but in some areas people dont use internet due to poor economical si...
^^^^
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some areas people dont use internet due to poor economical situation. presently,...
^^
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...s people dont use internet due to poor economical situation. presently,In my point of vie...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Presently
...rnet due to poor economical situation. presently,In my point of view,government should t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
... to poor economical situation. presently,In my point of view,government should take...
^^^
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , government
...situation. presently,In my point of view,government should take resbonsbilities to aware pe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... about the benifit of accessing internet first and formost,with the use of intern...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...t the benifit of accessing internet first and formost,with the use of internet,pe...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...accessing internet first and formost,with the use of internet,people can connect ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...rst and formost,with the use of internet,people can connect with digital world due to i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...h digital world due to its conveniences.For examples,one can use it for different p...
^^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...rld due to its conveniences.For examples,one can use it for different purpose such a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: AND_SO_FOURTH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'and so forth'?
Suggestion: and so forth
... purpose such as buisness and education and so fourth so they can be faciliated with internet...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...so they can be faciliated with internet.Secondly,it is better way to make country cashle...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...can be faciliated with internet.Secondly,it is better way to make country cashless ...
^^^
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...ransfer huge amount online.as an example,in many countries,citizen give importance ...
^^^
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , citizen
...t online.as an example,in many countries,citizen give importance to modern method of tra...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...of transaction they pay in cash. Next,it is also fruitfull for citizen because t...
^^^
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ies and can earn huge wages.consequently,it is lucrative for growth of economy.Last...
^^^
Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Last
...y,it is lucrative for growth of economy.Last but not least,In some countries,a massi...
^^^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...for growth of economy.Last but not least,In some countries,a massive proporation of...
^^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...omy.Last but not least,In some countries,a massive proporation of people follow or...
^^
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... about modern lifestyle and can adopt it By contrastIn this modern era people hav...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
... amount to suscribe it.in many countries,a significant number of people cannot aff...
^^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... number of people cannot afford because the are in poor condition so some people believ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... so some people believe that government shouldnt force them to use it To conclude,go...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...government shouldnt force them to use it To conclude,government is middle path to...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , government
...dnt force them to use it To conclude,government is middle path to ensure individuality ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o ensure individuality about the benifit of using internet as i have discussed ab...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45528455285 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55247342287 2.65546596893 134% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593495934959 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 22.4926829268 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 286.931273227 43.030603864 667% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 447.333333333 112.824112599 396% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.0 22.9334400587 358% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.6666666667 5.23603664747 624% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 1.69756097561 1767% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225902831704 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186242353819 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497351066739 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148072886153 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580060217378 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.3 13.2329268293 342% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.21 61.2550243902 -33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.5 10.3012195122 354% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.57 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.75 8.06136585366 146% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.4329268293 267% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.8 10.9970731707 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.