Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Studying history helps us understand what was happening in the past and therefore makes us acquire some enlighing. however, with many benefits from history, it does not mean we have to learn this subject. It is not a wise desicion that all university students should be required to take history courses not matter what their major is, for it wastes students' time , no everyone is interested in history and schools have to pay for more history frofessors.
It is a waste of time for busy unversity students to learn unnecessary history courses. As is kown to us, students are engaged to many activities and studying. History couses are not as important as their major courses. Therefore, spending time on history couses takes up the eccential time for other significant business.
The majortity of students are not interested in history resulting from its boredom . Just as an old saying goes," Interest is the best teacher." Obviously, if students take no interest in history, it would lead to low study efficiency. eventrually, even though they delicate much time and energy to history, they learn not as much as the teachers previously expect. For example, when I was high school, I was not interested in history and I felt upset to learn such boring subject. Besides, my history teacher was conventional, relusting in the tedious class. As a relust, I paid less attention to it and finally I no doubt did not gain a good score.
If all students take history courses, schools have to hire more teachers and pay more. certainly, only the number of history prefessors can they meet the demand of students. Thus, universities have no chioce but to add more relavant teachers and assistants.
Nowadays, it is extremely expensive to hire a professor, especially the famouse unversities.
In a word, regarding to students and school benifits, asking all students to study history courses cannot achieve its previous expentations. Therefore, history course are should be elective courses rather than required courses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12084592145 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85631842611 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5933352854 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2105263158 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25252077045 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763594908591 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077306377786 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133913356706 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962753937814 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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