In some countries few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the govt should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion?
The discrimination between high incomes versus low income has seen disputable in many parts of the world. Some people feel that exceptionally high salaries leads to the development of country, while, others argue that the state should manage and distribute equal amount to avoid unfairness in the society. I think the concept of income is wholly depending on talent, academic achievements and special skills.
Firstly, fair opportunity of enrolling in reputable organization is open for all, great academic achievers tirelessly study for securing good career. Those who work hard later earn handsom...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 302 350
No. of Characters: 1564 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.169 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.179 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.691 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.204 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.695 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... society. I think the concept of income is wholly depending on talent, academic achievements and sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38870431894 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7773053121 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667774086379 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8300059248 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.2 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282140228145 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953338918407 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732551127309 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124331521728 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655626000884 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.